Here we go ^^

So I just submitted the prologue of my new story for approval (hopefully I didn't do anything stupid that will get it rejected). If it is approved I just wanted to make a couple of comments about it here. The format of the prologue is a little bit different than that of the rest of the story. There's a reason I called the prologue "Four Vignettes Concerning Loss". Once chapter one is released and so on the flow of the story will be more, well, flowy, and not quite so choppy. This is intentional though. I like the atmosphere the prologue provides (I understand everyone wont agree with me, but what the hay).

Also, I understand this story can seem a little dark at first. Yes, there will be some darker elements as the story progresses, but trust me when I say the Adventure tag is really all it needs. There will be much lighter overtones frequently during Gearcrow's journeys.

Having said those two things I really hope people will enjoy this. ^^ Have fun reading.