Im reworking Eyes of the Accused

Hello everybrony, or more correctly whoever reads this.

I've gotten inspiration for a third fanfic about my OC Green Ace but in order to write it I will read through my last fic (Eyes of the Accused).

I will deal with the so-called "text wall of DOOM!" before I upload it here on FF (FimFiction) so that I might get less down votes as i assume they are gven to me because of that wall.

I will also be more focused on the details as my dear friend so kindly pointed out when he read the first chapter (Redemption).

...and if anyone cares enough to read this far I would like to ask you for feedback and please, do give me a comment about what you think about the Fic.
The details i'd like to get from your comment are listend below.

-- Story (most your idea of it)
-- Grammar (English isn't my native language so I could use some feedback on this)
-- some of your thoughts about the events (OPTIONAL)

Yeah. that be pretty much it (im very rarely satisfied with something i've written or done but that's just me)

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