Overhaul time

Ok so you will notice that Rise of the Dark One is now back "On Hiatus" That's because I am now giving it an overhaul to clean up some plot holes and add scenes that need to be added. The story itself flows at a good pace but it's not a perfect pace where I want it to be. This has actually been my very first attempt at writing a full on epic piece and I want you all to love and be invested in it like I am. I;d like it to be one that you the readers talk about with your friend and say "Wow. That was a great series." You know?

Things that are being changed:

1. Trixie's past will be more in-depth. IE: A look into why she is in the state she is. Originally I had planned this to pan out throughout the story piece by pice, But SOme scenes need to be shown before the story even begins such as her being booed off countless stages before the one shown.

2. A scene is being added to the prologue in which you actually will get to see the banishment of The Dark One. I want give a bit of history to him before his reveal, give you reason to hate him

3. A plot-hole involving a certain character I mentioned but didn't show is being changed.

4. Yes. there is going to be FlutterMac Shipping. This and Twixie are my favorite shippings and I want to include them (though Twixie will be used in a very small amount, you'll see what I mean). Deal with it. I do not appreciate the comments about how "FlutterMac" is over done. So is AppleDash and I still love reading the hell out of those stories

5. Snoop Pony Pone is now Snoop Diamond Dogg, I can;'t believe I never thought of that one before someone told me about it XD

Ok So... changes to be made and than the story can resume :)