Burning Chaos Idea · 3:06am Apr 24th, 2012
Hello everyone I probably don't have anyone reading this but I don't really care. Now I have an idea for a story and this is a story I want to complete and finish since most other stories I write end up not being completed. So the basic idea is an evil creature who is the mentor of Discord but he was locked away but Celestia and Luna prior to Discord's first imprisonment. So here's the summary I came up for the story.
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Deep below Canterlot Castle lays a prison for what Celestia believes to be the devil himself. An evil being has been released from his prison and he wants revenge on Celestia and Luna for imprisoning him. In the night he escapes and releases a creature while he works. This demon is know as The Shepherd of Silence. The Shepherd wants nothing more than to slay the Mane 6 and steal the Elements of Harmony. When he succeeds in stealing them he uses them to corrupt Twilight Sparkle and turn her against the others. After he attacks Ponyville, the remaining ponies flee town and must discover his creator who now hides in the Everfree Forest.
Each chapter will be told from the perspective of the Mane 6 and eventually 5. The Shepherd is a character who is only fueled by the thoughts that were planted in his head when he was first created. Twilight's corruption occurs in Chapter 7 when the Shepherd makes his attack on Ponyville. In any case I will take constructive criticism on what you think of the story and what I should improve on.
