Ok, I may have lied. · 12:41am Dec 8th, 2011
I managed to find some spare time after all and the second chapter is DONE at a healthy 8329 words. I felt the scene with Applejack being introduced felt a bit tacked on at the end so I'm moving it to the next chapter. I'm just reading through everything again and tidying it up and then I'll post it.
Constructive criticism/spotting errors I missed will be greatly appreciated as always :)