Starting A Second · 3:30am Sep 20th, 2013
Ok, so I am taking the tips I got from secrets, which I admit, wasn't the best story you have read, I rushed it, that's my fault. I am not making a sequel yet, but I am writing another story. Hopefully with your constructive criticism and more time on my hands, this one will be better quality. =)
Actually, be honest, I think it was very good. But if you thing you can do better, I'm not the one to stop you, good luck!
New Jersey, out!