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Loss Zagus · 10:43pm Sep 19th, 2013
I have been sitting on a story i started over a year ago. Its another Fallout Equestria spin off story but very far from the taint, and off into a long lost desert. Once used by the mob, the city of lights has been rediscovered from the old war. What else beneath the sand and rock? Ya, I don't know if it would be a good idea to post it on to here. Should i?
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Yeah. You should. Be good to see another fallout story.
1361354 Really? I mean, do you think that they are getting a little old. plus i don't know how well it is.
Well I'm not much of a critic but last time i checked they are kind of dying out but hey what do i know. How ever it would depend on how well your story was written and how many spelling mistakes there are, and i see a lot of spelling mistakes in your one story. So overall if it is written good and you have a good editor then it would probably be a well received fic.
1361662Very true, however i may have to go over it again, because i written it all in Windows note pad. So, I know there are tons of spelling errors. Plus I need a proofreader to look it over. I don't have any money to hire anyone reliable.
1365020 Is it possible for me to be your editor or pre-reader. I mean I am a bad writer (Really I just can't put my ideas into words very well) so there isn't much for me to do on this site. But how do you edit a story. Do you send them a pm or something, because I don't know at all. And sorry it took so long to reply. I was busy.
1369470 No problem
, to be honest, i live near my editor so i head over to his house and he looks through my story on my computer. However, in this case, i would say yes sending a pm with your story attached to it. Once they are done, they save it and send it back to you. I know how hard it can be to put your ideas down on ether paper or computer, but what i do is, i see the story play out in front of me and i write what i see. ya, i have tones of spelling mistakes but i did it. 
1373665 Okay thanks for telling me. My problem with writing is I can't ever come up with a beginning for my stories, or reports, or essays. I had never gotten good grades on those things. That is the hardest part for me.
1373715 I do admit, Starting a story, even a chapter is difficult. The key is to a good beginning, is to give just enough info to the reader to keep them interested to keep reading. To me, that is the hard part. The fine details are the fun parts of a good story. Besides, i didn't good grades on that's stuff ether, unless i had someone proofread for me. However, I was always full of ideas. Still am.