Jacob's Blog

First Fan Fic:

Status COMPLETE! I'm really proud of myself, not only is this my first fan fic completed, but it's the first any kind of story I've finished. I'm happy the way the story turned out for the most part. As a few people pointed out the pacing was a bit fast, I'll have to correct that for the future. I'm also a bit unsure about shipping with an original character, it always feels a bit Mary/Gary Sue to me, but at the same time I feel like Thunder Clop wasn't that way. I tired to give him flaws, but at the end when things go well it's hard to find ways to exploit them. Anyway I hope people liked it. I've got two more ideas in my head. One of Applebloom dealing with a tragedy and for the other I want to explore the back story for Sombra that I made up for The Royal Guard.

If you guys have any thoughts about my stories or anything please comment. I'd love to discuss the finer points of the story. :)