Alright... Now then · 6:02am Sep 8th, 2013
I've got all kinds of ideas in mind for my story, And I've been paying attention to the suggestions given to me by others, (I really have for fear of my story sucking if I don't...) now there's just one problem. I have TOO MANY IDEAS. And half of them are so random and annoying that if I use them I will likely lose every one of my watchers and anyone who ever enjoyed it in the first place... In short? I have well over the needed amount of ideas, But i have to sort through all of them to get rid of the ones that suck... This... Is going to be a challenging time for me, The next chapter is under work but it MAY take a while, sorry. My mind is becoming a WAR zone right now... I have to beat back the bad idea's before they take the mountain pass... TO WAAAAR! *runs face-first into wall*
*update* on a side note... 200 views... Might not seem like alot to most people, but to me... Just... Wow... I have people who have read and enjoyed my work... Thanks to everyone who's read, And ESPECIALLY those who have helped me improve how this story has been written.
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your story has eleven likes and two dislikes. FTW
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Im aware, but I also have to say that without the help that everyones been giving me, I wouldn't be nearly so far, so I'll repeat the basic message my post said. Thank you, I REALLY appreciate all of the help you and everyone else have given me, And chapter 3 is coming along, albeit slowly... I'm not sure that I'm doing so well on this one, if you could check it out on my pastebin i'd be very appreciative.
http://pastebin.com/KaPj02V0
Used your starter, Thanks for that, again.
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Is no worries. I'm going a bit slow on my chapter as well!
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Also, you might want to read through what you've already got on that chapter before you add more. Not only will it give you a little bit of inspiration, but you might be able to notice the mistakes that are there.
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I was more hoping for your opinion on what I've got so far, whether or not i got the characters actions to a point where it would be accurate to what the characters would actually do and how things would overall go... I myself have scatterbrain when it comes to that kind of thing, I may be thinking I've done it right when in truth there are huge mistakes everywhere I don't even notice... Thus why I need help when writing.