First Story

Wrote my first chapter and submitted it. Here's crossing my fingers.

The idea of the second twilight sparkle was really silly because I kept wondering how would the EG Princess Twilight take to her new school life not realizing that there had been another like her but from equestria. So I reversed the story and had their twilight come to Equestria to meet the Mane Six.

Eventually she'll have to return but I think the chaos of her coming could wake Discord. Hee Hee.

Edit: "Failed Moderation" People are such nit-pickers. I'm not seeing quality when trolls post obvious tripe and yet a legitimate pony fic fails. How ironic.

Edit: Passed Moderation. Now waiting for some good criticism.