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joining my story

ok there are only 5 available spaces left soooooooooo....who wants to be in my story? i just need the name of your oc and a description...no im not stealing your ocs i just want to make my story better since its doin okish. I still belive that i can perfect this story ALOT so please help me
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547 weeks
Sorry for my slowness

Guys I'm sooooo sorry for not writing. My folks took the wifi away and I'm grounded but I guess I can write now. So new chapter coming in a minute.
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New story vote

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Grounded for ?

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556 weeks
Help

I need suggestions for my story to make it better.I know its good but also too short.
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Help · 1:44am Sep 1st, 2013

I need suggestions for my story to make it better.I know its good but also too short.

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TheBronyaroundthecorner #1 · Sep 4th, 2013 · · ·

if you want to be better, and this is my opinion, try writing the story on Word first before putting on Fimfiction, then look over it, reread and reread. next try and research the main characters and how they act.

Or, if your having trouble, get someone to edit your story.

this is just advice to help you and not criticism
Keep trying and you will get better