So I need a little help.

I was just recently rejected by Equestria Daily for a second time in my submitting Triumvirate. So I was hoping that anyone who had read it, might be able to give me review. Good. bad. Everything. Don't hold back. I want to know everything.

Also, if anyone is interested in doing a beta-read, that would be awesome.

Thanks for any help you might offer in advance.

Comments

[Thespurgin]

First, explain "Beta Reading," second, I don't have an EQD, but I read the story itself less than two days ago (yes the whole thing... just call me the reading rainboom. )

Maybe it's the copious amount of cursing? MLP or not... that might have something to do with it.