Where's Chapter Two?!

Okay, so I know that's it's not done yet. BUT I HAVE A GOOD EXCUSE!!...I think. Uhmm...college? Attempting to get a job? MMORPGs? Wait...that last one...You know what? Forget it. I'm working on Chapter Two, and it should be done reasonably soon. I just wish I had someone to go over it with, so it A). Isn't as choppy as previous chapters, and B). Feedback is always nice. So, if anyone's offering...That'd be really cool.