Major Revisions for Chapter Fourteen and Chapter Fourteen Side B (Possible Spoilers for these chapters) · 5:39pm Jul 23rd, 2013
In addition to grammar/spelling corrections, there are MAJOR plot points and explosion that have been updated.
I labeled this as major because I removed some possibly story sensitive text in both chapters. After reading the chapter comments, and asking Demon Eyes Laharl the what the deal with vaccines and diseses between Earth and Equestria, I've decided to remove the following from Chapter Fourteen:
'we need to give you a vaccine against a few Earth born diseases'.
So if you don't want to reread chapter fourteen, she will be returning in a week to simply to check her visa status and her blood work as far as Verde knows.
In Chapter Fourteen Side B, I have decided to remove the following from the story due to being informed by someone who wishes to remain anonymous that I am making a large assumption with how misborns work. Taking his arugments into account, I agree. The statement being removed is this:
'Thats part of the reason why misborns are stigmatized.'
Until more information on the misborns comes out in the open, I won't touch on the topic of Misborns.
In addition, Chapter Fifteen has also been synchronized to follow the edits of these two chapters