Chapter 3 of Red Pegasus

I've written half of it already. Of course, I won't spoil it. But I don't know if what I already wrote will be good, or will turn this whole story upside down.

So, any suggestions for chapter 3? :)

Comments

[Eclipse]

I know, parody more energy drinks.
Vemon, Slap (yes SLAP.), or maybe some nice pussy (that's an actual named drink.)
p.s. more character antics

[Jinadan]

1005 Here in Singapore, theres only Redbull and Naughty G ): Caffeine drinks are discouraged, and Alcohol + Caffeine drinks are banned.
A Monster Energy here in Singapore can only be bought in one place where thry ship it for america, and they sell it for 20 SG Dollars. Thats crazy.
I wanted to parady Four Loko, making it a more powerful the Redbull.
I'm considering this though, Ponies mixing Redbull with apple cider, making a more dangerous concoction.
And yes there will be more character antics :D
I'm uploading chapter 3 at around 1 to 2 oclock at night (GMT + 8:00) Stay tuned :D

[Jinadan]

1005 Here in Singapore, theres only Redbull and Naughty G ): Caffeine drinks are discouraged, and Alcohol + Caffeine drinks are banned.
A Monster Energy here in Singapore can only be bought in one place where they ship it for america, and they sell it for 20 SG Dollars. Thats crazy.
I wanted to parady Four Loko, making it a more powerful the Redbull.
I'm considering this though, Ponies mixing Redbull with apple cider, making a more dangerous concoction.
And yes there will be more character antics :D
I'm uploading chapter 3 at around 1 to 2 oclock at night (GMT + 8:00) Stay tuned :D

[Eclipse]

1027 Well, the power of the internet my friend.