Giving it another go.

Just for curiositys sake, I googled the name of my old deleted story, and I came up with this https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BIhZrWpWrH2Mpar6AV3LSZhtMyU9_HMV98g-DZ7qDWw/edit
Reading through the story again (With the hilarious text-based commentaries), made me realize again why I even started writing the story, and that yeah like everything I'm gonna have some critics, but They are wrong and I am right. (Hahaha) But seriously, opinions are like belly buttons, everyone has one, and everyone's is different. I just didn't know how to take in-constructive criticism.