Anything Goes!

i got a decent amount of comments, favorited, and four positive ratings, so it seems like im doin SOMETHIN right. if you've got somethin you want me to know for future work, PLEASE DO, i do not mind at all. i welcome any form of mail or comment, if you feel like you gotta hit the thumbs down button, you go ahead and smash that thumbs down button for whatever reason you dont like it. if im gonna be a writer, im gonna do it right. anyway, thanx for the feed back from my first chapter