Jul
2nd
2013
Working on a new fic, want to preread? · 3:05am Jul 2nd, 2013
Hi everyone!
i've been working on a new fic recently and i'd like to get some opinions before i post it. The fic is about Rarity using time travel to fix a problem but ends up so horribly destroying her life that she can't bare to live in the new timeline. She ends up jumping off a bridge.
I realize the story doesn't really have a plot, it's more of the effects of a decision. Anyone want to take a shot at it and suggest improvements?
i'll pm the google docs link if interested.
I could take a look for you.
I'd certainly be interested.
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Oh sorry, i didn't see this reply until now
I'm actually in the process of altering the ending. I was going to have rarity commit suicide but i'm experimenting with having her accept the new reality and trying to live in it. It's still unfinished. Want to have a look at what i have so far anyway?