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  • 592 weeks
    January Update

    I wanted to post something earlier in the month but I kept forgetting once school started. I'd like to try and do an update once a month so we'll see how that goes.

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  • 601 weeks
    TFT Chapter 4

    Hey everyone, I know it's been a long time, but I have finally published chapter 4 of Termina's Final Twilight. I wanted to apologize to everyone who has waited for it, (especially those who first saw the story on Equestria Daily). It's been over a year since I first published chapter 3, and since then, I have had a lot of bumps in the road. Although I have always felt bad about making people

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  • 631 weeks
    Update

    Just wanted to stop by and give a quick update. I know that I said I wanted Chapter 4 to be up a few weeks ago, but a few things are getting in the way. The biggest thing is that I'm practically rewriting the entire chapter to add a few new things. Some of the feedback that I received said that the chapter was too fast paced and didn't expand on some of the ideas. By rewriting the action scenes,

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  • 634 weeks
    Editor Needed

    Hello everyone, here's a quick update on how the story is working out. I'll be releasing Chapter 3 either Sunday or Monday, as I said I would. The plan is to have Chapter 4 done over Easter break. The good news is, I got a review on it and can start making revisions. The bad news is, it seems to be quite a bit of rewriting, so it will take a lot more work than I would have hoped. Anyway, once I'm

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  • 635 weeks
    Hello!

    Hello there, thanks for stopping by. I've been writing various things for most of my life, but I've only started writing fan fiction a year or so ago. I posted my story on Equestria Daily a while ago, but I wanted to try a community for literary centric. If you have read my first chapter, I appreciate any criticism and feedback you can give. I am always looking to improve, and really hope to use

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Editor Needed · 3:42pm Mar 30th, 2012

Hello everyone, here's a quick update on how the story is working out. I'll be releasing Chapter 3 either Sunday or Monday, as I said I would. The plan is to have Chapter 4 done over Easter break. The good news is, I got a review on it and can start making revisions. The bad news is, it seems to be quite a bit of rewriting, so it will take a lot more work than I would have hoped. Anyway, once I'm done with it, I will need someone to look over it and double check to make sure it is okay for publishing. I normally have a friend of mine who did this for me, but he's been very busy as of late, and I usually can't rely on him to do it in a swift manner. So, if you're up for the task and have edited before, either comment on this blog post or message me, and perhaps we can talk a bit more. I'm not looking for someone to pick apart every sentence and pick out problems word for word. Instead, I would like someone who can look at the story, comment on the progression, and give me an idea on what parts seem rushed/not enough detail. Sometimes, these things don't stand out to me, mostly because I write in a way that "I" understand, not what "everyone" else does. As I've said before, I want this story to be interesting to anyone who reads it, not just fans of the Legend of Zelda series. Anyway, thanks for taking the time to read this, and if you're interested, hit me up. In the meantime, I'll be rewriting Chapter 4 and will hopefully have it completed by April 9th.

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Grah, if you needed a Grammar Nazi, I'd be more than happy to help.

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That would be a big help!

51614 Oh, well, in that case, I'd be happy to help. :pinkiehappy:

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