I'll fix it.

After my last story being a total bust, I removed it. I'll just fix it and come back later. I hated my story more and more every time I read it. Thanks for the criticism, but I'd rather my story be more than a rough draft when I upload it. I was pressured into posting it by friends, and it wasn't done yet. I deleted it, and I'll do my best to fix it, and if it looks good, I'll repost it, but that probably isn't gonna happen. I'll get back to you. Maybe.
Most of it made sense in my head, but I'll just have to try again.
Just don't hold your breath.
Oh, and something people should do is not pay attention to mistakes, and try to focus on the story. If the mistake is so huge that you can't follow the story, that's great to say something about, but I usually do my best to ignore mistakes. Other than grammar. Those are hard to ignore if they're everywhere.
Go read something, and I might be back later.