Jun
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Lethe v2! · 5:29am Jun 5th, 2013
Alright, so the Lethe rewrite went live today. I'm much, much happier with where it is now—both the quality of the prose and story as a whole, and the world-building elements, and foreshadowing of events for The Moon Also Rises work much better now.
There have been substantial changes to the structure, and relatively minor plot points. I'd encourage rereading, though it isn't necessary.
I'm asking around for reviews/comments/feedback at the moment, and I will leave myself open to making minor changes in some areas. However, I think the overall story is pretty much done now, and to tell the truth, I'm glad to have it behind me. Now to focus on Sage's Might, The Moon Also Rises, and biology exams!
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