Decision for YOU ALL not ME.

So after getting nothing but likes and mainly good reviews I have been debating. Should I write more onto Not the Dentist and add it to Slice of Life? That also makes me ask if so than who would Edit the story, not to mention proofread.

I already have more on the subject and I can always add more characters to the story, but as it is all done I would need to rewrite chapter one and make it a bit more explanatory as well as a bit more time to correctly lay out the story line.

Should I?