May
30th
2013
Season Unending needs to be fixed · 8:05pm May 30th, 2013
I'm not satisfied with the whole pre-journey stuff. When I reread everything from the first chapter to Twilight leaving Ponyville I just can't stop cringing. It's a lot to rewrite and I'm itching to get to the juicy bits of the story. Everything up until now has been the buildup, and everything is on the verge of swinging into full motion. And now I decide that the first chapters need rewritten? BLAH!
As if I didn't take long enough already.
I won't take anything down or go on hiatus. Just be aware that I'm planning on redoing the first bit. Someday.
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RealBarenziah · 411 views
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I really liked how the last chapter showed the difference between Skyrim and Equestria. I my humble opinion, I would wait until the story is done to rewrite an earlier chapter unless the rewrite would help explain a plot device in a later chapter. Keep up the good work.
1115652 There is a bit of info in the first few chapters that will pop up later in the story, but I'm starting to feel those elements are rather forced and unnatural. It probably won't be finished for quite some time, but waiting until it is so seems like the best option.
I have one question, I can't remember if it is stated in the story, but if I am looking at a map of Skyrim, where would Twilight be right now.
1115672 Don't worry, I have a map that I'll be posting soon.
Thanks.
