• Member Since 4th May, 2013
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Rylee the Pegasis


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  • 284 weeks
    im,,

    my edgy twelve year-old self: im coming back soon !! writer's block xd

    me now, an even edgier seventeen year-old: lmao what a scrub

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  • 567 weeks
    The Wait

    A few blog posts ago, I announced that I would be staying on FiM. I still am, but, it may be a while until my next story. Because of personal issues, I have been in a writer's block. Until I can get my crazy life in order, I probably won't be posting. Even then, I'll need a while to create a decent and grammatically correct story. Hopefully, I'll get a new story up before school starts back up.

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  • 568 weeks
    News and Other Things

    After much begging and confessions, my friend decided not to leave. I'm so happy now, and I hope he stays for a long time now. Anyway, my next story is coming up soon! It's a surprise! By the way, I read Happy Appy, and I made a review video for it.

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  • 569 weeks
    Depressed

    Have you ever heard the saying "You look like you lost your best friend."? Fortunately for most people, they're just sad. But, for me, losing my best friend is the case. I met this guy on a chat. We became best friends, which was great for me. But, I was informed by CreepyPastaFriend earlier that he was NOT coming back. Now, I'm sad about his departure. You'll be greatly missed....

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  • 570 weeks
    Staying!

    After getting lots of great advice from people, I've decided to stay! I've realized that everypony has a rough start, but, we all can pull through! I'll continue to get better, and take tips that are given to me. Thank you for supporting that I stay! I'll continue to move forward and improve my work!

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May
24th
2013

Bad News (Probably Good For Most of You) · 1:03pm May 24th, 2013

I'm thinking about leaving FiM Fiction. I was replying back to a comment when I realized that people where so much more nice on FanFiction. Sorry to those who have been positive towards me, but, apparently, Bronies and Pegasisters don't practice love and tolerance like I thought they did. I don't know if I am leaving, but, if I do, the people that are nice to me... know that I'm on FanFiction. Sorry, Creepy... and people that care. I can't take the rude comments anymore. I worked so hard on these stories...

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Comments ( 8 )

Come on, don't give up. I put up like 5 stories with ten times more dislikes than likes and comments you are probably familiar with. I deleted all of them and started over. I read both your stories and I have to say that you and I are quite similar. We both have ideas that could work but doesn't express them in the best way possible. How about I work for you as your editor. I really don't want to see people give up on things they like to do.

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Thanks. I'd really appreciate it if you would help me edit. I'm so happy now, this is exactly what I needed. :pinkiesad2:

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I am at your service

Hey, come on, shrimp. Everyone has their rough starts.

My sympathies if you took the criticisms of myself, FicusCat, and moviemaker too hard, but you really need to understand that there is a make-or-break moment when you create a story.

You can put your life and soul into literature, but if it isn't put into good formatting, pacing, grammar, etc. you have no chance of getting praise for your works.

Honestly, you're not too bad compared to numerous other, self-loving, detestable, fan fic writers I have had the displeasure of meeting.

Just plan ahead, Rylee, and you should be fine.

P.S. Don't mention your age on the internet. There are... dark things you should not be exposed to and people will take advantage of any knowledge they have of your real life.

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Thanks for clearing that up, I really appreciate it. :pinkiehappy: I'm going to take your advice to heart and try to have better formatting, grammar, etc.

Also, about mentioning my age on the internet, this is a rare thing and I'm very cautious about what I do. Thanks for caring! :raritywink:

Hey, I wont lie, no ones perfect. I wasn't, I had a story with 1 like and 12 dislikes but it didn't stop me. Read guides and stories, Right now I have practiced and now got 10 likes and 0 dislikes on a story from practice. Please don't leave, I read both stories and they have potential. I know you are young, so am I, but never ever give up.

I'd be lying if I said I didn't think of the same thing every now and then. However, you'll most certainly find jerks anywhere you go. Realize that some people are not like that and you'll be fine. I've already mentioned my feelings on how I'd appreciate you sticking around. Of course, only if it is okay with you. You have good content in your stories but slightly lacking a few spelling/grammar writing skills. I suggest joining a group on here (they are helpful) as there are people on this site who are going to school for English, journalism, etc. You'd be amazed at what they can teach you.

To tell the truth, FanFiction is a much more supportive environment for Crossover, Gore, Grim Dark, and HiE stories. There is much prejudice on this site over any stories with those tags. Moving to FanFiction really is a viable solution. So, like I said, it entirely depends on where you feel most comfortable.

Received negativity is no cause for alarm as I can clearly see from the others who commented that you have plenty of support.

So...
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