Blockhead: Help me make it better

Greetings, all!

As many of you know, Blockhead in Ponyville is my first fan fiction. I noticed that people seem to be unhappy with the latest chapters, and I would love to hear from people before I finish the next chapter, because I need to know how to make my story better.

Please comment on this post and answer the following:

1. What was your favorite chapter?
2. What are your five favorite jokes in the story?
3. What is the worst part of the story so far
3a. Plot-wise
3b. Format-wise
4. How long would be too long between new chapters?
5. If, after the story is complete, I re-wrote and edited the story extensively, would you bother reading it?
6. What is the air-speed velocity of an unladen swallow?

Sincerely,

Derpy Mooves

P.S.

The number of followers does not match the number of likes and favorites. If you like a story, give it a thumb!