Chapter one is rewritten right now :3 · 1:47pm May 7th, 2013
Hey guys
I wanted to say that Chapter 1 has been rewritten. I am waiting for Bronymaster and Creator to get through it and tell me what they think I should improve.
So thats all for now.
I also have to add that editind and rewriting the storie is gonna take a little bit longer than I thought.
And I am aslo gonna add an prequel for this story since nopony knows what his parents did before they died.
Sincerly Xaratos
p.s.: Stay strong my friends after this is finished you are going to enjoy the story again :)
p.p.s.: here are some random cute ponies
p.p.p.s.: DIE BECUASE OF THE CUTNESS OF THIS MARE!
My body is ready.