M!Verse beginning story for C!Verse SADLY REDONE

“Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria, there were two mighty & regal sisters, who created and ruled a glorious empire that encompassed all the land. As a sign of their divine might, the elder sister, Celestia of the Sun used her power to raise the sun at dawn and awash her subjects in light and warmth. The younger sister, Luna of the Stars and Moon used her power to raise the moon and arrange the stars into beautiful constellations. Thus, the two sisters maintained balance for their kingdom and their subjects: all the different types of ponies.
"But soon the elder sister became corrupt with hate and power, becoming the tyrant Corona, embodiment of hate and fire. The younger sister became the embodiment of cold and the night, Nightmare Moon. The sisters devasted the land in a fight to determine who would rule as Queen of Equestria. With their last shred of good-will and love, they merged to devastate the land less. But all their good was gone, and it became a time of half-light, of both day and night- where it was eternally eclipsed...
"Cadence, another alicorn who was laying low for a time, confronted Corona Moon/ Nightmare Sun with the Elements of Harmony. Wielding them, she banished her to the sky- where she watches all of her little ponies. But eventually, she'll gain power once again, and return from banishment one thousand years after the day she was defeated..."

Not my best work- I'll do better on the computer. BUT GUESS WHAT?!? I was searching up the original one on another tab on the iPad, and my whole writing disappeared. And I redid and it isn't as good. Welp, hope I got a response eventually! EDIT: I did a better version in the story, which was actually me copy-pasting the original story and editing it to fit.