Edit #1

For the very few that actually read the first measly chapter of my fanfic, I made a severe update to introduce the first of what would become many non-human AND non-pony characters. The second chapter is also in the works, so DO NOT hesitate to tell me what you think of it so far. Your input is very important to me, and if I think you have a valid point or observation, it will make the other chapters better.