Changes · 10:43am Apr 14th, 2013
I have updated the first chapter a little since it I first posted, bearing in mind it was 5 minutes after I had woken up so I may have missed a couple errors, I will get my friend to give it a look over later on so I can amend any other mistakes I have made. The plan for today is to fix it up and then work on a full plan layout for the story, I know what i want from it I just need to organize what goes where. I will also try not to leave a big gap between updates to the story. Thank you for all the support, you guys are great.