New Update! --Gangrene Bio--

Here's the progress on Gangrene's character Card!
This lovely mare!

Tell me whatcha think.

Comments

[Turtledude]

That's awesome.

But 'Good Natured' seems a bit off. Of course, she's not a character to be taken at face value...

[TinkerChromewire]

996127

I assure you, it's not off at all! She's very good natured...With children. And the sick or injured. With raiders and scum? Not so much at all!

[Turtledude]

996133 Like I said, She's not a character to be taken at face value. There's much more to her than it first appears. (don't judge a book by its cover, kinda thing, which is ironic because Second Wind is a book with an amazing cover, and it's awesome.)

[TinkerChromewire]

996134

Ah, does that mean you'd like a preview of the chapter I'm working on?

Also, what do you like about Gangrene as a character? What do you dislike?

And yes, Nessy does AMAZING work. And thank you for complimenting my story, I try to listen and improve when critiqued and provide a story that isn't cliche or sucky.

[Turtledude]

996139 I'll wait until it gets published.

What I like about Gangrene is that she doesn't reveal everything at once. There's just enough of a mystery (like the rest of the story) to keep me guessing and reading.

I don't think there's anything I don't like about her (yet, there's always a 'yet'). She's... I dunno. She's an awesome character that acts all tough and shit, slaughtering raiders and slavers alike, but underneath, she's just a teddy bear, which is awesome. I have a character that is kind of the opposite (she openly shows that she's kindhearted, but really, she's a bit of a hard ass and a bad ass, with a penchant to eradicate raiders from the wasteland.)