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CoryBrandstetter


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  • 629 weeks
    Celestial Knights (Anti Trolling Group) Is Up

    Yeah my Bro brandsca123 has set up an anti trolling group so if you need any help with anyone who is trolling you then contact me Since I am an admin in the group :P

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  • 629 weeks
    It's over

    Yep we have won for now at least. Only time will tell if we have to return to battle

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  • 629 weeks
    SOLDIRES NEEDED

    I am in a flame war with this troll here: XavierOfThailand

    He said some bad things about my brother and we are currently fighting him as we speak. We need soldires

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  • 629 weeks
    Announcement!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need some help.

    Yeah I need some help with a few things and here they are:

    1. Pre readers, yeah I really don't know how this whole pre reader thing works so just pm me the steps to allow pre readers.

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  • 629 weeks
    Sunday Shoutouts #concerned brother + News + Two songs

    You may have noticed something in the title of today's post. I will tell you the reason why. My brother brandsca123 has recently become a veggietarian. Now normally I would be very accepting of the fact that my brother is trying something new, he is in fact forgetting to supplement the protien he is missing (I.E eating beans and rice or tofu, or nuts.) as such his body is getting weaker because

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Mar
19th
2012

GOD DAMMIT!!!!!!!! · 2:49pm Mar 19th, 2012

I keep losing the data for the third chapter every time I write it. GRRRRRRRRRRRR well the third chapter is going to be a while then since I have to write it from scratch again.

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hey bro some advice on how to make your stories better (not that there not good now :D)....

1. Make up charicter profiles for the charicters you wish to add. Provide a backstory.

2. before you write out a chapter get a peice of paper and a pencile and write down any notes onto what you want to have in the chapter I.E, Charicters, and Plot.

3. Write a first draft and read it over carfully outloud. if you spot any mistakes or the story dosn't add up fix them.

4. get a friend to read over your work to proof read it.

5. write a second draft with the nessisary changes and read over it again and have a friend proof read that.

6. make a good copy on the site and publish the chapter once you have a friend proof read it a third time and voila your finished.

Thats also why it's taking so long for the fith chapter of Hope/or a baby in equstria to come. other than that have fun.

36481 bro i actually already have every single charector profile planned out already, plus i always write down the entire chapter on paper before i even post it. the proof reading comes when i am writing it on this site.
the reason why i am having a hard time now is because the site was down and it had a hard time posting the story, in fact it ended up corupting the file several times. but thanks for the tips though

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