New story

Okay my first story was a bust. The characters were unrealistic, and the plot had more holes than a cheese grater. It was bad enough that I didn't even like it. So now I have something that I think will be much better.
The Title is called The Color of Greed and it is in the submission process as I post.
If you haven't seen The World Eater then bless you. Now please check this one out.

Thank you, and may Harmony be with you always.

TheFlyingFish