Mar
27th
2013
Kinda stuck · 4:04pm Mar 27th, 2013
Welp, I'm kinda stuck in Fallen Princess, I know where I want the plotline to go, but getting it there is another story. I'm just not happy with how the latest (unposted) chapter is turning out. It seems choppy and abrupt, and not at all to my liking.
Equestria Prime, I'm going to have to rewrite as I'm not happy with that either. The plotline of Ponyfying the autobots and decepticons seems too far fetched. I see it working with the Beastwars continuiety (which is why Equestrian Front ROCKS btw).
Until I get through this there won't be many updates.
Also many thanks for the love Pain Of The Sun has gotten.
Well, I know absolutely nothing about you (I kinda link-hopped here), but, I might be able to offer some assistance on Fallen Princess. If you don't need it, that's okay. Not like the pain of rejection hurts or anything.
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Anything you can offer I will at least listen to, so go ahead.
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As I've been told that this is my 'forte' in editing, I'm extending a hand/hoof out to you. Whether you need an editor, pre-reader, or (if you already have those/don't trust me) just someone to yell at you about how good/bad your story is. Or, if you don't need any help at all, we can just stop having a commentversation.
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If you don't mind MS Word (Google docs is being a dick to me ATM) I can send ya Fallen Princess, sans any obvious spelling errors.
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Right because followers get you laid. Really dude you are a very shallow and sad... thing. Go back to rage quitting because thing don't go the way you want with the other spoiled fan bois.