Tryiny to prove something..

Hey, seeing as you cant upload stories that aren't yours I came across a little problem. I really want to prove that my fiance is a great writer..but he wont post it on here and I really want to prove he's a good writer so he can continue his stories because I love them. So if ya'll can see this, seeing as Im just a little artist only a few will, can you read is story and give him some feed back. It'll be so good to see him that happy to see some new commenters on the stories...it's Ditsy and the Doctor I know ya'll would like that :)

http://faustviii8426.deviantart.com/art/An-Interplanetary-Angel-and-His-Ditzy-310801217

Please and Thank you