Hearts of Equestria....REWORK · 7:17am Mar 19th, 2013
So just like the title says, my story Hearts of Equestria is getting a rework. I went and looked back at it and basically Im ashamed I wrote that. The writing was bad, the characters were out of place and the entire story seemed forced from the get go. Which is why Im reworking it.
I dont have an editor or anything but I plan on reworking the whole thing. Ill keep one OC but Im still deciding weather or not to recycle my character or make a new one completely from scratch. The first story was basically was a massive hack cross between Kingdom Hearts and FiM with my character thrown in there with spice, it followed the traditional base of KH:
Heartless show up, hero shows up. Hero recruits locals and some fighting ensues and heartless are banished.
That is a pretty cookie-cutter KH fic which is something I would like to try and move away from. Im going to go for something a little bit more organic from FiM and a real REASON why a Keyblade wielder would be there, either at the request or world-ripping sequence brought on by either Celestia or Luna. I have some ideas about HOW the heartless would show up, but thats for the story and not here.
