Minor changes, and rough update schedule. · 12:19am Nov 15th, 2011
First of all, please let me thank all of you once more. I never expected to get 115 watchers between the two versions of the story. I'm extremely glad that you all enjoy this story enough to want to know when it updates. That's a big boost to me, so again... thank you.
I did notice a few of you are tracking both, and that's great. :) Just to let you know, they are the same exact story. The only difference is that the 'mature' version will be the unedited (read, will have clopfic elements... Elements of Clopfic? Dear gods, someone other than I must write that one!) version, while the 'teen' version will leave the more explicit parts out. I'm just passing that on to help you simplify your watch lists. I have no objection whatsoever if you like it so much you want to read it twice. ;)
Now, for the bit about the 'minor changes'. There have been enough comments regarding the usage of filly/colt versus mare/stallion that I'm going to go back and edit the stories a bit. The reason I was using them the way I was is that I saw the terms in this way:
Foal = Kid (Generic term for a pony between infant and teen... not accurate to real life, but this isn't real life. ;) )
Filly/Colt = Girl/Boy (Teen through unmarried adult. After all, we say we're going to hang with the girls/boys not the women/men.)
Mare/Stallion = Woman/Man (Married adult. Simple enough.)
Instead I wound up sowing a bit of misunderstanding, which was never my intent. Thus, the edits will commence!
Finally, the update schedule. Being a full time worker at the upper end of the brony age spectrum (closing in on 4 decades), I'm going to shoot for a period of time between one and two days between chapters. It might be longer at times, life has a way of messing things up, but hopefully I'll be able to maintain. Any changes to the schedule will be posted on this here blog.
Thank you again for your readership, and enjoy the story!
CW