Searching For Pre-Readers, Editors · 1:47pm Mar 10th, 2012
Ahrm...
So... I'm a bit embarrassed to ask this, but I'll admit it. I'm not a terrible writer, I know I'm not. However, I'm either brilliant, or I'm mediocre. The brilliant moments can stay, but I'd like advice to help fill in the mediocre spots. My first attempt, Hearts of Glass, was not my best piece of writing. The very few that know me as the Yukigo Kurosaki of SoFurry (yes, you can stalk me there if you like. Whoooo...) know that I can put out much much better, given the motivation. Thus, I'd like people's thoughts before I put it out on a mass scale, especially because it means a lot to my mate and I, the new story I'm putting out. So, any volunteers? The only rules are below:
A) You must be okay with sexual content
B) As a result of A), for obvious reasons, you must be 18 years of age or older.
C) You need to be able to HELP. I don't need grammar help, I'm quite fluent in English (though if you do find anything, don't hesitate to give me flak about it.) I'm looking for story and wording help. I have so much I wish to convey, but it only comes out perfectly about 20% of the time.
That's it, feel free to apply if you've got the time/patience. Bring brain bleach.
