February Write Off · 10:15pm Mar 8th, 2012
Well ... Though I didn't won any place, I still tried.
The story was returned to me, and here it is:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/11513/Thunderstruck
Check it out. Critics are very welcome on this one, so if you don't like one part of the story, just tell me in the comments.
Thanks in advance.