A bit difficult than I first thought · 1:28am Feb 18th, 2013
hi everypony its me i'm just here thinking that this story is going to be a lot harder than i thought because now that i think about it Derpy and Shine are slowly starting to get pretty close meaning that its going to be a tiny bit difficult for when the Night Guard comes in but don't worry for I do have an idea on how it will work........ kind of but anyway I'm also thinking that this chapter is going to be even longer than the second I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing for it depends if you guys like having long chapters. Oh I watched Episode 13 of mlp and i have to say it was alright but i'm kind of nervous because i'm afraid that that episode is the last one of mlp. I hope not but crikey 6 songs in one episode wow and I was very happy when I saw Vinyl in there. Anyway that's all I have to say at the moment if you have any questions you wish to ask me I will be more than happy to answer them as long as they aren't stupid ones ok.
Ok. Look. You are an author now. You are now in the position of having to play both god and devil.
Don't play just good.
If Derpy and Shine are getting close, let them. It'll make a good love triangle mechanic that you can fall back on for drama. Drama sells.
As a writer you have to always ask yourself "What is the worst possible thing that can happen right now?" and then write that in. You have to fight against your main character. You have to be willing to kill him if need be. You need to be willing to have every bone in his body be slowly broken until he is crippled for life. If you do that, then you will be doing a good job.
841107 i know that as i said i do have a plan but thanks anyway
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Then you shouldn't have said anything concerning the trouble. You do want things to be horrible, but you never want to point out that you are doing it for the sake of doing it.
841259 true but don't worry i don't plan on doing things like this all the time the reason for this is mainly just to let people know that I am doing the story and not being a lazy shit