Jan
29th
2013
Rewrite · 7:51pm Jan 29th, 2013
Right, I got a lot of feedback about the lack of information in the first chapter of Foal Factory. I was going to put it in the second chapter but there seems to be info in the second that I should have put in the first so here's what I'm going to do. I'm going to take down Foal Factory, rewrite the first chapter then repost it. I would also like those who keep asking for information to know that I don't like giving away all my secrets in the first few chapters so there may be parts you don't get straight away but I will eventually get to them, I just like my suspense and confusion.
Speaking of lack of info, in your "anthro" story can you please sho a picture that best shows how the ponies look, because from your very vage description of them in the story they sound like humanized, not anthro.
913189 I'm sure I already gave it a cover pic. It must have not loaded correctly though I have answered your post of the story.
913201
Yeah, I see it now. When I was browsing the picture did not show up. Part of the reason why I posted this.
As for you answering in story, i never saw it. I did not continue becasue the ponies sounded like they were humanized from their description in the first chapter. saying they had skin, and not fur is one of the things that you wrote that made them sound humanized. It is always better to respond to review as am actual responce. Not as a authors note.
Well anyway, thank you for ketting me know. Now that I know that they are real anthros I will give the story a read.
Good luck with all of your endeavors.
913422 Don't worry about the picture, I just fixed the upload after I replied to the previous comment and in the first chapter I refer to it as skin because, until they shake hands, they don't realise it's fur.
913556
Okat then.
That must man tghat your character is blind. Assuming that the ponies have the same lenght fur as real horses it should still be easy to tell they have fur.
Anyway, I will read the chapters later on, and leave reviews.