PVA quality control · 6:11pm Mar 1st, 2012
So I went back to chapter one today for editing that should have been done long ago... 'twas quite terrible writing. As such, I will be going through the entire story and correcting errors before releasing the next chapter. And now, I ask you, the reader, for help. I'd like to have this story edited by a third party as well, to ensure that nothing is missed. If anyone is willing to look over revised chapters, please send me a note.
A few other changes are occurring as well... Starshine's physical appearance is being changed from having a pink coat to a white coat. Other characters may receive similar changes as well.
The chapter, Cardiac Arrest, may be removed completely and re-done completely due to the poor quality of content within it. If anyone has any suggestions for a new start, I'd be happy to hear them, otherwise I will be using the same situation, but re-written from the ground up until midway through chapter two.
-NachtWolf
Hiya, Medic!
Please remember our talk about the aquagel (=hydrogel) :].
I don't think the story needs that much editing (it looks OK to me as-is). The only thing it needs is MOAR chapters!!!