My First FanFic

Hey its me again, just telling you that I finally uploaded my first chapter of my story " Fall of the Mane 6". In my opinion its pretty good but its really up to you readers online to judge me on how I compose my stories.I showed a rough draft to my friends at school and they thought it was really good. I just really hope that my story gets a good review and I can propel along with the story line to tell what happens to the team and how Fluttershy managed to become who see is when fighting the mysterious and very honorable Field Marshal. Oh well, I just have to continue on my work so I hope finish chapter 1.