Getting there! · 9:53pm Jan 18th, 2013
Well for those of you that actually like my story so far, I have news!
First off,
Chapters will be significantly longer. I was writing on my phone thinking the first chapter would be really long, but I came out with only 1600 words.
Second,
I hear my story is moving a little fast. I looked over the chapter and I completely understand why you think this is happening. Along with having a longer chapter, events will slow down some and be a little smoother.
Third!
I think I'm getting pretty close to finishing the second chapter. I'll probably have it down by tonight or tomorrow and I'll send it off to the proofreaders.