First Story · 3:09am Jan 17th, 2013
You know what's amazing... people still give this a thumbs down and yet... they still want to read it. It's truly amazing indeed and if you all are wondering why I deleted some comments. Two were made as what they thought was a 'Review' and didn't provide any help... they basically said it sucks and didn't give any reason. That is no excuse and I won't tolerate that. If there is a problem, tell me and I will fix it. Another comment was deleted because that person tried to accuse me of plagiarism. That is another thing I will not tolerate. I have never done that in my life nor do I do it now. Another thing that bothers me is comments like "Couldn't get past the first few paragraphs, blah blah blah, bs bs bs bs." If your gonna read something, at least read the whole chapter first, not stop at the beginning or in the middle. See it through to the end. At least when I read other stories, I read the whole chapter and more if it interests me. I don't bash you grammar nazi's but... don't be too much of an ass. In a couple of chapters, my characters show mortality or another word stating that they can get hurt. Please forgive the rant but sometimes you have to speak or write or type what's on your mind and this is mine. Don't like my story... oh well. I think it's good but it needs help.
