First chapter back up

Just finished the edits to the first chapter. there is some new stuff, grammar fixes, smoother dialogue, and should be overall slightly better. Most of the major changes to the later chapters are done, but the minor ones are proving the most difficult to find and are the most important.

Thank you everyone for your patience during this time.

Also I started a Tumblr for Dr. Heartstrings and Beaker, so feel free to send me questions.

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[Tonto the Trotter]

Yay, one of my fave stories returns