Random shit, yay! · 1:47am Jan 9th, 2013
So yesterday in my English Class, we did some freewriting. To be honest, I had never done a thing like that before, and it was fun! Obviously, I wrote about Discord.
But I was thinking that I could post it here in hopes that I could get some opinions on whether I should write more up on this or not? Thanks!
Darkness. That’s all he could see. Being imprisoned the way he was, he couldn’t even move, let alone even scratch his not or even see what was going on in the outside world. Punishment. This was what it was. His chaos had reached the very corners of Equestria, it raged, much like a ferocious tiger who was hungry. But now just for food. he wanted feeling. Emotion. Something that could make him feel any sort of sense or emotion. But that would never happen. He was imprisoned. In stone. A stone, stature prison, forever forbidden to move. Forever.
Always.
Without seeing the light of day ever again.
But maybe that could be changed. Maybe it could be help.ed. If there was just a way to get rid of those drab Elements of Harmony, he could have a chance. Just one chance, to take his kingdom back and see to things as they were. The land would be filled with his beautiful, delicious chaos once more. And... his daughter. She would be so happy to see him. Any mare of her kind would be SO distressed to see that their dad had been imprisoned for a crime he did not commit. His little daughter of Chaos, Screwball. His little child. ‘My Little Abomination,’ he would call her. “Screwball!” He’s call. “Come see your daddy! Give him a hug!”
“Sure, Daddy, she’s giggle in delight, as she jumped into his mismatched arms to give him a great big hug. Love, some called it. He called it the joining of twojtraitiors. They worked together as one. Screwball was nothing mroe than just a mere creation, but Discord loved her like a chile. Well, she WAS his chile, in a sense, but most ponies just call her ‘the mistake off all pony-kind’. Sad, it was really. But how could they know? They were under the misleading guidance of Princess Celestia.
Oh, Princess Celestia. How he hated that old, fat, cake-eating tyrant. “Oh, Harmony should be spread all over the land,: She tole him. “Harmony is what brings all together, in beautiful friendship!” Bleck. How cheese. Someone who was actually wise would know that Harmony and Chaos couldn’t be without another. But since Celesita couldn’t get that though her thick little skull, he was stuck here. “Discord.’, some ponies would call him. He was a malicious spirit of chaos and Disharmony, and that’s all he could ever be. He liked it that way.
But someday, maybe, there could be some hope fore this sad little shell of a spirit. Little did her know that for ever single day he was in that stone, the spirits of Harmony were seeping through his veins, reverse-corrupting his little chaotic mind with each step he took. These ponies would reform him. He didn’t know that, but everyday, day by day, he felt more and more foreign of the ponies who had imprisoned him that fateful day.
But on the other had, the bearers of the elements of harmony weren’t so sure about letting him go, except for one. This little pony was named Fluttershy, the element of kindness. By her name, she was a very kind pony, but sometime this could get the best of her.
Oh, by the way, I lied. Discord knew that every single day that this little ‘spell’ the ponies had put on him would take over sooner or later, but he found himself finding a way to get rid of this wretched, old prison.
Yup yup, got all that in a matter of 10 minutes! Anyways, what do you think? Should I go along with this and see what happens, or should it just stay in the old depths of hell that is my profile?
I think it's pretty good, you got a few spelling mistakes in there though.