WANTED: Pony fic grammar corrector

Did you know I've written a silly little one-shot fic? Why, it's right here: Rarity's Absence

Well, I've been attempting to send it to Equestria Daily, but despite the improvements it still requires corrections. Being my native language NOT english, I will never achieve such feat.

SO...

I'm looking for anyone who can proof-read the story and highlight (or even correct) my grammar mistakes, so I can try and send it again to Equestria Daily. I will of course credit whoever helps me with this, mentioning their name and even linking their collection from every place I've posted this story so far.

Can anyone help me, then?

(Max)