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Shadowmane Nox


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  • 348 weeks
    Update to Moonlit Soldier (and on life in general)

    Well it was an eclipse today... so yeah, felt like the perfect time to update this particular story. :derpytongue2:

    Though to be fair, I only finished Chapter 4 this morning, so happy coincidences FTW.

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  • 375 weeks
    What sort of chapter length do readers prefer?

    Hey all,

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  • 376 weeks
    New CMDC chapter out

    Hey every pony. I already mentioned it in the chapter notes but I thought I'd say it here as well. The new chapter for CMDC is out, but I only had the chance to give it a proof read. If anyone notices any jarring mistakes that need to be corrected, let me know and I'll get to them asap.

    Pleasant reading.

    - Nox

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  • 377 weeks
    Looking for ways to improve

    Hey everypony,

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  • 377 weeks
    Breif Update

    Well considering how long it's been, I seriously doubt that anyone is paying attention to this. For that ONE person who is, this is your lucky day.

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Dec
24th
2012

Equestria Daily Rejection. Is it strange I'm happy? · 3:38am Dec 24th, 2012

So the other night I received my first rejection from EQD concerning my story Facing Fear. While some disappointment is to be expected, I am actually very happy about this rejection for two reasons.

To begin with, it represents the first real critique I have received for my pony fics thus far, and for that I wish to thank the pre-reader (though I know they'll probably never see this). They gave me some great points to focus on, and brought up all the little pieces (such as spacing and punctuation) which I try to pay attention to, but have a tendency to get lose track of after the first dozen pages or so. They revealed the ways in which I added repetition without meaning to and replaced names and pronouns with descriptors which, while intended to avoid the aforementioned repetition, simply made it appear as though I was padding my story out. These are all excellent points, many of which I completely failed to notice. Yet while this rejection shows I have a long way to go, at least I now have an outline for how to improve. I'm excited to begin revisions (as well as continue with Dimensional Crusaders), and only wish I had more hours in the day to write. Unfortunately I fear MCAT prep will probably limit those somewhat.

The second reason I am so excited for this rejection is because it has forced me to consider whether or not I want to keep going. Before today I have asked myself on multiple occasions whether I would view revisions as too daunting a task. Would I hear back from a per-reader and simply consider myself no good? Would I just give up? I was not so sure. Yet upon receiving this rejection, I now know what I will do! Given the time, I WILL revise and resubmit my story! And hopefully this experience will prevent me from making the same mistakes in future chapters.

As I go on, I will of course continue to ask anypony who reads my stories to give me feedback if they see fit. Hearing back from an EQD pre-reader is great, but I would prefer far more critiques. All comments are greatly appreciated, and extremely helpful. ;)

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