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A female with fiery personality and ready to write what comes from her heart. My writing is complex with my own personal twist, also a Christian.

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Jul
29th
2023

Hell With Sombra · 5:33am Jul 29th, 2023

Satan, the devil horse, is seen watching over at the millions of souls in the caverns of hell. Various souls of the deceased are flying in his hindsight, as he watches from his throne of solid black shadow. He groans in boredom at the sight of the them flying here and there. When was God going to send a soul down to Hell for him to torture? More like I need to torture more new souls, depending on the sins they committed. I know the Lord will declare something.

"Pony kind suffer broad situations of sin constantly. So, when they die, will Messiah declare to send them to my realm. I hope to receive some additional tainted, tempted souls", he declares to himself. As Satan puts his hoof to his head to continue his train of thought, a shadowy blur of a spirit slowly ascends down.

A black shadow spirit, I know this pony. Satan takes his hoof from his head to get a look at the soul enveloping in front of him. The shadow fuses together, eventually forming into a unicorn with a gray coat.

"Ah, Sombra. The pony I didn't want to be sent to my realm. What brings you here?" Satan condescendingly declares, as he adjusts himself to sit more upright on his throne.

"God won't allow me into fucking Heaven, that's what!" Sombra shouts.

"The Lord can hear you, ya know, you shouting bitch". Enraged at the cunning, mysterious demon, Sombra begins to leap at him. Once Sombra thinks he's close enough to the demonic entity in front of him, he takes punch towards the demon's cheek. Sombra's hoof touches the demon's cheek very hard. Satan, however, is unaffected as his cheek shows no impact. Since he's a creature of hell, immortal, Sombra's punch has no harm towards his face.

"For fuck's sake?! Why didn't that punch affect you?!"

"I'm a spirit, punk!" Satan says certainly, as he begins to get up from his throne. He then throws a punch at Sombra's face violently, his payback for attempting to punch him just now. Satan then claps his two hooves together, as he's on his forehooves, as his orange bright flames quickly slither. The flames spell FUCK YOU! as it slithers, spelling the word for Sombra to notice.

"I am immortal imbecile, don't forget that!!" Satan's red eyes glows, as he levitates Sombra and throws him towards the walls of his realm.

"Welcome to hell, Sombra! BASTARD!!"

Sombra struggles to get himself up. "How are you so strong?!" Satan trots up to him, eyes still glowing with slight rage. "I am a dark angel, it's a secret". The dark horse of hell trots away from Sombra and sits back on his throne.

"Why am I here, is the question", Sombra tells Satan. Satan points to a vast book within walking distance, then beckons his head left without saying another word. The deceased Sombra trots to the book before him, arriving in front of the book in a few seconds.

Septem Mortiferum Peccatorum.

Sombra reads the strange title on the cover, then looks towards Satan uncertain. "Aren't ya gonna say something now. I can't read that strange language on the cover."

"You jackass, it translates to Seven Deadly Sins. You committed at least more than one of those sins listed in that book. Open it and read the ultimate sins you committed when you were alive", he says as he face hoofs.

Sombra hesitantly reaches a hoof to the book's right side. He slowly opens the cover to a blank introduction page, then tries to turn to the next page, but the rest of the pages are blank. ’What?’ Sombra thought. While sitting on his throne, Satan claps two hooves together to signal the book to reveal Sombra's first committed sins; Pride and Wrath.

Satan cunningly gazes at his left hoof, admiring its hypnotizing darkness of beauty. "Once a mighty villain who never showed care for others, only cared about himself. You sure sinned with pride". As he views the silent, animated replay of his conquer and overthrow of the Crystal Empire. Sombra cannot help, but merely scoff, at the animated replay of his life memory.

"I made the decision to overthrow Princess Amore when I got older. When I had grown into adulthood, I was tempted, due to my obsession with dark magic. Due to my pride and wrath, I turned her into black crystal. Eventually shattering her black statue, out of anger, for making me decide to attend a positive event such as the crystal fair”. Sombra recalls.

Satan sits up. "You played with your desires, chose the dark side, chose power over pony kind. You were selfish, cruel, cold hearted, and dishonest when you were alive. Did you not realize that inside yourself? You are one of the most despicable spirits I have ever talked to, during my long time reign in Hell". At hearing the word "spirit", Sombra takes a few seconds to process what is going on with himself. He tries to feel around his entire body to see if he is still in the flesh. Unfortunately, his body is nothing but a shadowy mist. His soul had left his physical body when he was defeated by the Mane 6. I don't have flesh anymore. I did die, my soul is still fresh after having risen from my body!

Satan laughs. "Now you only realize that your soul has passed on. Heh".

Sombra turns from looking at his new form towards the horse devil. He then gives himself a moment to observe the master of hell's appearance. Atop his head, he possesses a flowing, misty black mane with a dark, gray coat - with a hint of blue. Satan's horse form reveals his figure as buff, since he is a horse of regular stature. Unlike the ponies of Equestria, who possess a more other worldly features.

"You have a point there", Sombra says with defeat, in his voice. Once snapping out of his observing trance of the demon. Is he done admiring me? Satan thought, as he rolls his red eyes in the opposite direction.

"Anyways, what else do I have to look at in that peculiar book?" he asks. Satan uses a hoof to gesture the page to turn, as he sits in silence to observe what Sombra's doing. The pages of the book turn quickly, revealing Sombra's third sin, Greed. The word then appears in an extravagant, medieval looking font with black ink.

"Greed?! There is no possibility I committed such", Sombra gasps, as he glances at the fancy writing on paper. Satan sits in silence again as he claps his two hooves together, to reveal another animated memory of Sombra's.

"Here we go again", the former lord-of-darkness says as he rolls his eyes.

…….

Still in progress, I won’t go into too much detail about this story. Let me know what you think.

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Don't wanna get spoiled, so I'll be patient and wait.

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It’s in progress, word goal is maybe 4,000 words. TBD.

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