Hybrid Rainbow Rewrite.

Yeah, I've made my decision, folks - Hybrid Rainbow is going to be rewritten and for these reasons:

- Clunky pacing
- Needs more inspiration
- I was making it up as I went a long

But don't panic, folks! I assure you that the new version will be A LOT better than the original. Trust me. However, I'm going to need ideas and inspiration for what to put in it. Things like scenes, gags, heartwarming/sad moments, etc. Any ideas?

Comments

[Kwisatz-Haderach]

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I remember reading in a book on the history of manga (VERY good book, at that) about romantic stories where the characters have sex without actually having sex. Usually, this is a very symbolic and intimate act, whether it's shaving, grooming, practicing at something, making something together. I wonder what scenario like that would be appropriate for our two lesbian lovers? It probably would have something to do with Spitfire teaching Rainbow Dash how to do something, considering her more dominant personality and position... What do you think?

[typhon217]

I would recommend putting in more moments that focus on RD and Spitfires relationship. I would also try to make the story move along at a slower pace.